Its true I made it into last week’s creative writing prompt ‘My Doomsday Moment’.



Dooms day 
when I hear
I zoom out to a place
Darker I have never seen

Alone I stand
revolving in 360
rotten and dead
every living thing I see

Too much of noise
I am dancing around
A never ending vibration 
I feel under my feet

I look above
No stars no moon
So vacuum the space
and Black I’ve never seen

Then I look right
lands torn apart
floating on the
reddish yellow magma, I see

And to my left
mighty waves going up and down
And like the wrecked pieces of ship
wafting land I see

I run forward
stamping the debris’s of 
humans, plants and rocks
stinking all around

I stop at the edge
like that of a peninsula
Its dividing them
Into hemispheres

One of the Magma
And of the water
Both engulfing  
Left pieces of land

What am I doing here,
when everyone is dead
Am I the chosen
Like the Noah of this ark

Yay! I am the King
The powerful
The wish of every human,
Proudly I say standing on my ark

To a sudden I see
mighty waves from both sides
ready to gallop the peninsula
I am standing on

O Lord! save me,
I prayed looking above
The waves getting louder and higher
A sound speaks to me

You raped your mother
not once but thousand times
She cried, but didn’t say it loud
You killed everyone.

Every time you stabbed her
Undressed her
And made her to die
She wept, so Its her time now

Who patiently 
kept obeying me
Not cursing me for once,
the life I gave her

Didn’t every books 
warned you
You reap what you sow
Now her wrath is on you

The waves fall on me
I burn and drown
I wake up from reverie
I am back to earth

Back to living, I relax
I seek refuge from everything
I cried to Allah.
Dusting off the Quran on shelf.

I read Qiyamah,
The Judgement day
For it warns of the day
The horrifying end

Scriptures say that
before the mightier one
small ones will occur
as the signs of the End

I ask to myself,
Are not tsunami, Katrina
and Nepal’s earthquake
The signs of the End.

Aren’t the zika
and Ebola a wrath 
to the human race,
I ask myself.

What about Global warming
and the drowning of arctic,
aren’t these the signs of
the End.

O humans! 
just see around
the wrath you have
welcomed upon

High time you 
take steps and pray
to your Lord.
For you don’t know when is the End.


Another difficult try, hope everyone likes 🙂

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.





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  1. Ohhhhh! This is beyond awesome. It is suspenseful yet thrilling, truthful and also frightening. But thank you for these lines:
    High time you
    take steps and pray
    to your Lord.
    For you don’t know when is the End.

    They are just comforting and beautiful. 😀

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  2. This is sooo scary… you just reminded me of my class I had on this and it gave me sleepless nights for a while!! ;'( May Allah protect us on this day when the sun id right above our head and the hell-fire is open to the world… Ameen!!! Beautiful words … well expressed!!!! And scary tooo! 😛

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      1. haha nop I think I have passed that stage! 😛 I am fine Alhamdulillah got a lot of frightening stuffs on mind!! 😛 So no time for sleepless nights! Coz my sleep knows if it doesn’t sleep now I will replace it with coffee for a whole day! 😛 Tons of pleasure involved! 😉

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